The Mage with the Dragon Magic Book 1 eBook Irfan Mirza
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When Taro, a young orphaned mage, attempts to heal a stranger in the middle of a storm, his life is changed forever when he begins to tamper with foreign magic known only to most fierce and dangerous creatures of all dragons.
The Mage with the Dragon Magic Book 1 eBook Irfan Mirza
"The Mage with the Dragon Magic: Book 1" is a short story in the sword and sorcery genre by author Irfan Mirza. This Kindle e-book was approximately 35 printed pages and sold for $0.99 at the time of writing this review.Some thoughts on "The Mage with the Dragon Magic"...
The Pros:
1.) an intriguing story of a struggling mage who is about to discover some new abilities.
2.) a tense beginning that captivated my interest.
3.) a potentially interesting hero, Taro.
4.) lots of action.
The Cons:
1.) a few grammatical errors (verb tenses in particular) that for a story this size should have been picked up by someone.
2.) repetitive wording... for example, the word 'groaned' (or its derivative) was use 11 times throughout this short work to express pain, exasperation or exertion. After about it's 4th or 5th occurrence, I groaned out loud ;-). Repetitive wording... a frequent finding in works by new novelist. I'm always surprised that the editor(s) or Beta readers don't pick up this most amateurish of writing mistakes.
3.) although this book started well, it quickly seemed to change into a rushed and hurried journey through to the end. Just too much happened to our hero in too short a time... going from neophyte mage to King of the Dragons in a scant 35 pages.
Impressions:
This tale had potential, but the author seemed to lack the necessary writing skill (at this point) to turn it into a more polished and professionally presented work. I think he'll improve substantially with subsequent books.
As it is... 2 1/2 Stars
Ray Nicholson
@ralannicholson
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The Mage with the Dragon Magic Book 1 eBook Irfan Mirza Reviews
Nice fast read, good book to read on the plane or while waiting for an appointment. leaves you a taste of a good story. Waiting more.
I was disappointed that the books were more like chapters in a story. I don't consider it a book when it takes less than an hour to read.
I love reading this book on the other books that follow now I just need the last book I am hanging and I'm on pins and needles until the next book comes out I can't wait
Started out ok but became muddled. Not happy paying for a book then getting a short story.
The short blurb about what the book was going to be about sounded great. It showed to be 510 pages. Not sure how that numbering system works but I read the whole thing in under an hour. Hero got his power too quick and there was practically nothing else to it
This feels like a fragment of a story. Not bad, but so incomplete. When his city is attacked by a rogue queen dragon, the young hero drains her power and runs away. Good cover.
Unbelievable the I spent money for a chapter that's it. It wasn't even a good chapter. Why in the world was this book a recommendation.
"The Mage with the Dragon Magic Book 1" is a short story in the sword and sorcery genre by author Irfan Mirza. This e-book was approximately 35 printed pages and sold for $0.99 at the time of writing this review.
Some thoughts on "The Mage with the Dragon Magic"...
The Pros
1.) an intriguing story of a struggling mage who is about to discover some new abilities.
2.) a tense beginning that captivated my interest.
3.) a potentially interesting hero, Taro.
4.) lots of action.
The Cons
1.) a few grammatical errors (verb tenses in particular) that for a story this size should have been picked up by someone.
2.) repetitive wording... for example, the word 'groaned' (or its derivative) was use 11 times throughout this short work to express pain, exasperation or exertion. After about it's 4th or 5th occurrence, I groaned out loud ;-). Repetitive wording... a frequent finding in works by new novelist. I'm always surprised that the editor(s) or Beta readers don't pick up this most amateurish of writing mistakes.
3.) although this book started well, it quickly seemed to change into a rushed and hurried journey through to the end. Just too much happened to our hero in too short a time... going from neophyte mage to King of the Dragons in a scant 35 pages.
Impressions
This tale had potential, but the author seemed to lack the necessary writing skill (at this point) to turn it into a more polished and professionally presented work. I think he'll improve substantially with subsequent books.
As it is... 2 1/2 Stars
Ray Nicholson
@ralannicholson
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